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Paris in Ruins: Working with Personal Accounts
WRITTEN Past M.Yard. TOD
Authenticity is crucial to historical fiction. Weaving the right alloy of facts and fiction will transform a reader in time and identify while staying true to the historical record. Deep, wide-ranging research is required to achieve this objective.
My latest novel, Paris In Ruins, begins in September 1870 and continues through the Siege of Paris and the Paris Commune. Knowing nothing of that time in French history, I wandered around in Google-country to orient myself, gradually slotting my finds into categories like way, life and society, Paris maps and landmarks, women's lives, the French government.
By the summer of 1870, Napoleon III, nephew of Napoleon I, had presided over France for 22 years, first as president and and then as emperor. For some—the aristocrats, the Catholic Church, armed forces and political leaders, the upper heart class—life was good. However, the gap between rich and poor had widened significantly. Protests bubbled beneath the surface, occasionally spilling over onto the streets in riots and demonstrations.
I'one thousand a firm laic in looking at bibliographies, which is how I stumbled on the first English account of someone who'd experienced both the siege and Commune. I was unable to read any of the many accounts written in French and was grateful for this discovery. I tin can laboriously translate and have even paid for French research help on a few occasions. Yet, it's a serious handicap when writing historical fiction set up in a country where the customs and language are foreign.
That first personal business relationship was written past Elihu Washburne, America'due south ambassador to France. Michael Hill incorporated Washburne's letters and diary into a volume: Elihu Washburne: The Diary and Messages of America's Government minister to France During the Siege and Commune of Paris. I lost myself in reading about that horrifying fourth dimension. After, I constitute and read Diary of the Besieged Resident in Paris by Henry Labouchère, My Adventures in the Commune past Ernest Alfred Vizetelly, and The Insurrection in Paris: Related by an Englishman Davy.
Each of these accounts provided observations of the people and politics, the military activities that took place, the impact of war and the uprising that followed, as well every bit the look and feel of Paris. Collectively they helped me build a world for readers filled with real details: the toll of meat; the daily atmospheric condition; the mood of Parisians; the rumours that swirled around inciting unrest and anger.
Did I worry that these diaries were written by outsiders? Yep and no. I had to cheque the facts for accuracy and ignore comments and generalizations that appeared biased. Yet every bit an author of fiction, I create worlds for my readers. These diarists actually lived in that world. Their observations and concerns were intended to inform readers of the on-the-ground situation, not to mislead them. The diaries were indispensable to my understanding of Paris and its citizens in those tumultuous times.
Elihu Washburne wrote virtually daily offset in early Baronial 1870, when the French army, under Napoleon Three'south leadership, was battling with the Prussian regular army near the border between those two countries. Past early on September, Napoleon III had abdicated, and a new regime was established. The item and imagery of his entries enhanced many of my scenes.
September xv, 1870 — Every carriage has disappeared … the city is but one large military camp. Three hundred thousand soldiers passed in review earlier Gen. Trochu … regiments are marching downward the Champs- Élys ées and as I write I distinctly hear them singing the eternal only e'er inspiring, Marseillaise.
Two master characters in Paris In Ruins are women of privileged upbringings—Camille and Mariele. Did their parents object to them walking in the streets? In one scene, the sound of the Marseillaise leads Camille and Mariele into the midst of a dangerous mob.
December 23 & 24, 1870 — The state of affairs is condign daily much more grave here in Paris. The suffering is intense … The clubs have begun again to agitate … they are killing off the horses very fast … 500,000 men now under arms for fourteen weeks take accomplished nothing and will not so long as Trochu is in control.
In Paris In Ruins a pocket-sized Christmas dinner becomes the setting for conflict between the younger generation and their parents as Mariele and her blood brother argue that the rich aren't doing enough for the poor and that General Trochu is incapable of saving Paris.
April 6, 1871 — Vast numbers of the best citizens are seized as hostages and cast into dungeons … All Frenchmen prohibited from leaving Paris.
A passage similar this combined with research into the actions of the Paris Commune prompted a scene where Camille'southward brother Victor, a Catholic priest, is taken earnest by a grouping of Communards who also steal golden and silver artifacts from the church building.
When the Communards set Paris on burn down in the concluding days of the Commune, Alfred Vizetelly puts the reader in the very midst of the scene:
"The flames seemed to travel from either finish of the great façade—over 1200 feet in length—towards the fundamental cupola-crowned pavilion … there came a terrific thunderous shock and uproar, and the whole of the surrounding commune trembled. Flames now leapt skyward from the central pavilion of the palace, whose cupola was tossed into the air, whence it fell in blazing fragments, while a myriad of sparks rose, rained, or rushed hither and thither, imparting to the awful spectacle much the attribute of a 'bouquet' of fireworks."
This diary entry helped create a scene with Mariele, Camille, and their mothers watching Paris get up in flames. The vividness of Vizetelly's writing was instrumental to the mood of fear, anger, and grave distress. Were their loved ones in the midst of the flames? Would one of them perish? Would Paris ever be the same?
To compensate for the all-male perspective, I found a few diaries written by female person artists of the time that had been translated into English as well every bit a translation of some of Louise Michel's writings. Michel was a well-known leader of the District. I read of French etiquette and manners, the education of women, the rights of women, famous salons led past women, and diverse articles concerning women of the 19th century.
Personal diaries are treasures for writers of historical fiction. They should be verified and augmented with other sources such equally non-fiction, visits to museums, an understanding of the armed forces, political, societal, religious, industrial, and technological circumstances of the time. Leveraging them judiciously into plot, dialogue, setting, narrative and other elements of the story volition truly send readers in time and identify.
ABOUT THE CONTRIBUTOR: One thousand.One thousand. Tod'due south almost contempo novel is Paris In Ruins. She as well maintains an award-winning blog chosen A Writer of History.
Published in Historical Novels Review | Issue 98 (November 2021)
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